hvile.net - norsk overnatting database

[hvile]

Hi,
Please rate my new site - Overnatting - hvile.net (content, graphics, functionality).
Project is new - site's online for 1 month.
All tips are welcome. If possible, please answer in english.
Thanks

 

[allegretto]

Excellent design! One of the best designed websites Ive seen

 

[Erlend]

This was awesome! Who has designed this web site?

 

[Dag Frogner]

The design is nothing less than awesome!

You need to translate some more on your page. The "Contact us"-page is not in norwegian at all, newsletter is "nyhetsbrev" Norwegian and there a

I also think that you really, really need to get someone to read through the whole page and correct the grammar, as there is a LOT of bad language here.

The page doesn`t validate:

[Invalid] Markup Validation of http://hvile.net/ - W3C Markup Validator

 

[selbekk]

Great job with the design - the only thing I feel is missing is a sentence or two to describe what the web site is about, like a tag line.

 

[Tonny Kluften]

Yes, interesting design. Just missing content now...

Why do you list random hotels and events in the left sidebar? What visitor would that be useful for?
Do you speak norwegian and if not, do you have someone else that can fix all the spelling mistakes?
You should not put the site online before you have more hotels. Not one hotel in Oslo!?!?! Come on, who will take that site seriously?

You have been focusing on the design ok, but now its time to get some content.

 

[hvile]

Hello again, and sorry for delay

Overnatte is our student project titled 'Webservice for foreign country'.

Webpage:
- Official domain was changed to overnatte.info.
- Spelling mistakes was probably eliminated. Could anyone check it?
- Content (offer list) is still not complete, but in progress..

Your rate is very important for us, so if you any questions or propositions We will be very pleased and answer as soon as possible (of course much faster than last time)

Regards

 

[pleb]

Excellent design!

Some misspellings:

"Stavagner" --> "Stavanger" [When you check the weather...]
"Tilfoy tilbud" --> "Tilføy tilbud".
"Region" --> "Fylke". [When you search for overnatting at the right sidebar]

And... when you are trying to put people on your newsletters, you really should be careful with what you write.

Now it stands: "Anbefal Hvile.net til dine venner. Bli med oss nå! Oppgi e-post-addressen din"

You should either ask them to give the address to a friend (not your e-mail), or you should ask the visitors to give their own address. Now it's just... a bit messy.

 

[Nutz]

Yup! Nice site.

Only one thing here.
In the list of all ad's you have a reader-friendly list, but on the white background the text is gray. Change this to black, no need to change that textcolor when you have done it in the background.
Gray text, for me, in a list stands out as "disabled" or "not active" or "not available".